Made me laugh out loud. These two are such a fun ship! The twist is what made it great though, because it's kind of more fun not knowing. XD

Hah, cute! I'm a go for the seducing route)

awesome

bwahahahha! I love it! XD

Amazingly Awesome! I love it! hahaha I even laughed out loud! _

Oh this was great! I love your writing style.

That is what Zaraki'd think, isn't it? Very funny and in-character, 10/10.

Happy to see you writing Bleach again, and this paring! :D Can't wait for more if you write them again.

I love this story. I cracked up. I'm only glad that the other girl in the room is too busy doing homework to care what I do.

HaHaHahaHaHaha! That's fuckin hilarious! ah..! Stop. my belly...!

ROFL!

I do enjoy reading your works. Makes me nights, haha

Please write more with Byakuya/Zaraki as only you can make it happen

Heh heh.

I can totally see this happening!

LOL...that's kenipachi's idea of seducing someone LOL

“No way,” Matsumoto counters. He doesn’t even have any boobs. Or great hair, like Yumichika.

So funny!

LOL, drunk Zaraki! XD