DeniseV,
This was a very meaningful story.
Mark and Milt get each other in dangerous situations and all and even though they dont say it out loud,it is plan to see how much they really do mean to each other.
Milt knew it was his job to convince Mark to stop talking and feeling bad of and about his self.That can be a hard time to convince him of that considering he feels he's always bad luck.
I am so happy to read another one of your stories.


JeanneZ84

I just read your story and had to tell you what a joy it was to read. I would love to see you do a follow up story, like maybe the ride home?

Oh, Denise, what a gem! I, too, loved Mark's vulnerability--and the fact that you built this perfectly in-character story around one tidbit in the show...the limp! You painted the picture at the beginning from the scene we all know so well--Mark putting his hand on Milt's shoulder for support as they walked to the restaurant. I always had this little bug in the back of my head that wondered why, after 1 month did he need support...wasn't he limping all along. And, then you go and explain it! I am so very glad you are sharing your creativity with us. Oh, and I loved Mark's hint of jealousy towards Milt's new friend!

And, I hate to ask, but I really REALLY need to hear the conversation in the truck on the way home. Any chance you'll let me (and all of us) listen in sometime soon??

Can't wait to read more. Thank you so much for making my day :-)

The original epilogue was another one of those "end on a light note" bits. Your epilogue to the epilogue is much more in keeping with their perilous adventures and the tone of the rest of the episode.

Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us, I loved reading this story, Mark and Milt are perfectly in character and this has always been one of my favorite episodes. I loved the Dr. and you could feel how he conected with Milt.

I loved this...you did a perfectly good vulnerable McCormick. Great job! But, I think the story needs to go on... I want to find out if Hardcastle finally tells him his feelings.

Denise, good for you, noticing that limp and using it to build a story around! I liked your Dr. Hannaford and Julie very much; they both felt real. Fun jibing between the guys and some nice inner reflection by the Judge ... but he still hasn't actually said very much to Mark. But then, he's a master of understatement and gruff, 'well, you know,' sorta stuff when it comes to the softer emotions. Altogether, nicely done. Thank you.