nice job! and of course since it was written by you, i didn't see any grammer/spelling mistakes. Very well written! how come you won't write stories for harry potter!?!?!?! they would be as awesome as this one! this one was written really well, and even though i've never seen the movie i still basically got everything that was going on. Very nice!!

You've done an amazing job with this. Well done, I completely adore it - and proud enough to say its became a fav. :]

So, I just wanted you to know that I read this completely absorbed with my mouth hanging slightly open in awe. Yes, I just wanted you to know that. :D
In all seriousness, wow. well done.

TT.TT Wow...
This was... so amazing...
I don't even know what to say right now... I'm just in total AWE of this oneshot... You just inspired be to write more more more watchmen stuff so ill be off to do that now...
I love this so so so much...
~Kurai-chan