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Pissenoffanis
2009-12-22 . chapter 1
I can't believe this story doesn't have more reviews! It's delightfully dark, a very nice one shot of the real effects of war...

Just one thing - "mystic emeralds" sounds a little tacky... I love "of the finest cut" after it, but mystic is a bit too, er, I dunno, spirity? XD
thistlesong
2009-09-14 . chapter 1
One of the best stories I've read in a while. I'm not really sure what could possibly be improved... except, write a sequel!
HalandLeg4ever
2009-09-03 . chapter 1
Great to see you writing HP again. I do hope you are able to continue with In Memory- really fantastic story, and I'll certainly read the rewrite whenever you get that up!
barbarataku
2009-09-03 . chapter 1
Incredible!! This so lost feelingmakes more sense then the original, not necessarrily the rape part but the shear brutality of death eaters.
lady sakura cosmos
2009-09-03 . chapter 1
good story
BluEyz91
2009-09-03 . chapter 1
Really good. I don't know what else to say except that it was well written and leaves me wanting more.
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