i like this chapter a lot.

ther's this one part, where it seems as if ... where one can see the desperation of sirius.

it feels like to sirius, james was everything. his friend, his brother, and then he's dead and everything sisius shared with james, he has now with harry.

harry is the only thing he has left.

i can't really describe this feeling, but you convey them very beautifull.

thank you very much for writing this story :D

now, i'm off to read the next chapter.

Hey, I know this story has been done for years now, but I came across it (and really enjoyed it, by the way). However, there were three things that I really disliked about this story. 1) On this chapter (chapter 15), it should be "Too cute for words", not "To cute for words", unless cute is now a verb, in which case I apologize for any confusion. 2)The ending just ended. I was surprised by the lack of conclusion to the story, and it kind of ruined the story for me. Hopefully there's a sequel to this story , and I'm going to stalk your profile to find out. 3) Sometimes it seemed like your Author's Notes and Q&As were longer than the original chapter. While you obviously won't fix that for this story at this point, it might be something to consider for future stories.
However, overall, I really enjoyed your writing and can't wait to see if I can find a sequel to this on your profile.

Hi
So this is a really nice story, but the length of you QA took almost half of your whole story!

I don't mean to be a bitch about it, but seriously the whole QA put me off. Could you maybe in the future send the answers personally? Thanks

Xxx

This was a pretty good story, but as the A/N and Q/A got longer than the actual story, I simply couldn't be bothered to read it anymore.

Oh wait...nevermind. I didn't realize the story was finished :D My bad.

Hi P.A.R! I'm really lazy to login right now, but are you gonna continue? Oh...wait...you haven't...actually updated in a couple years, have you? At least, that's what I think/

Why is there more of your so called AN and chit chat then there are actual storylines?

OH I loved this story. I couldn't stop reading it and I wanted to find our what happened to Harry and Sirius. Great Job! The only thing I would ask of you is to make your author's notes shorter.

wow! this story was awesome! i loved it!

great job!-Z-

cool

Harry is acting EXACTLY his age, having been raised in an abusive household. Do you really think he was taught to walk, talk, get much food, or how to eat? He's starting out as a baby would start...with no knowledge of the world around him, neither magical nor muggle. The first person to care, or love him was Serius.

I really like your story...if only your notes weren't longer than the chapters. Evidently you think PAR needs to be heard, more than read?

Ah yes...now I'm a happy camper. A bit of DD bashing for his idiocy, which continues to grow by leaps and bounds is a GOOD thing.

No one gets bashing down to a science quite like Bobmins stories, but then again Harry is mostly paired with Hermione (gag reflex activating here)...but you take the bad to get to read the good.

Rather disconcerting to listen to you speak of PAR in the way you do. Alter-ego I guess took over.

Oh no Sirius is in trouble again!
I'e noticed that you still haven't mentioned Remus and Sirius grieving for Lily and James. Even telling Harry constantly about them would show that he missed them, but there hasn't really been any metion of them at all.

Additionally, I would have thought that Sirius would have told Lupin right away that he was the reason his best firend had died. Why has he not said anything yet?

Yay, Sirius is on the mend!
I had spotted your mistake about Sirius's transformation, but I reasoned that he could now transform because the ministry had given him some potion while he was locked up, so this was enough to get him through for a little while. There, you didn't make a mistake after all!