This is really good :)

all your stories are amazing

Sorry for "lurking", but it is my habit to read to the end then review. Very well written in all aspects. Emily and Laurence's conflicting with themselves and each other really makes the entire story more interesting and enjoyable. Also, making Jason too smart for his age adds comedy to the already great story. Though the marriage between Temeraire and Iskierka was unexpected, it was pleasant and new. I have read various other fanfics by you and i have to say that they are just as well written.

Aw! I Truly love you for that Happy ending! I am a huge fan of your stories, and I hope there are coming plenty of them in the future! And you should know that I've cried throughout the story...

God... I love this story! And yeah, I'm crying... If Emily dies, I guess I will cry my eyes out...

Wow...this story took me on emotional roller coaster. May I recommend a warning to read it in one sitting? :P

Anyway, it was amazing, another great job. I can't wait to read more of your work.

Really enjoyed this. I love your little inclusions of history - like George's character. Clearly he was a complicated man.

Adored the ending, Jason's letter - I quite fancy the little relationship you built there between he and the Queen; it made the unlikely seem much more likely.

Thanks ever so much for sharing!

Jason heckling the Queen might have just made my day. Fantastic.

Aww, dragon weddings. Yet another social upheaval due to Temeraire. Its fun to see that you managed to work yet another aspect of the books into your story, that of social change. Also the queen was a wonderful example of the 'good ruler' I'm glad you had the prince regent as such a fop to counter it a little.

I just finished reading through the story, and just want to say I thought it was amazing. I don't normally go in for romantic "AxB" stories (I'm a guy, what can I say?) but this was just a great read. I could totally see it actually happening. And on top of that, I just want to say I'm really impressed with the historical research you did to back the story up. That really gives it a more "realistic" background that shows in the final product.

Thank you

A great read, very good plot line, and strong story line, the best story are those you see from the point of view of the central characters and this is what you have done.

I am looking forward to read more of your work

this was just fabulous. you have an excellent talent for mimicry of novik's writing style as well as a flair that's all your own. and the story itself was just grand. especially temeraire and iskierka's marriage. i nearly died laughing at that. and volly, poor volly and captain james. i've been especially fond of volly since i first met him in the books. he's just so innocent and friendly. sad to see how it led him astray and his captain to death. i really enjoyed the way you wove your story and look forward to finishing off the rest of your temeraire fics before too long. i can only hope that my limited reviews will be excused as i try and read everything as quickly as possible.

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Nice Story!

Would like to see the continuation of this one!

good ending (wags tail) but i would have loved to see Emily and Jason's reaction to Laurence and Temeraire touching down.

Beautiful! I loved the ending (especially Jason's spelling) and I can't wait until your next story!