Ahh I love your writing!
(and wow, someone else who thought of Takigakure, Shibuki, and Kakuzu, and Fuu! Lovin' it )

are these things fact, or did you come up with them? 'cause i'm writing a Fu Fanfic, and i need to check my sources.

nice to see a fic based on Fuu, interesting thoughts that you've made about her so far, related to Kakuzu and friends with Shibuki, that could make a really good story I think, nice job overall, keep it up

How bittersweet. :)

I really liked it.

pretty good

I liked this alot. I've been searching for stories on Fu becasue i'm adding her to one of my stories. She's essentially a clean slate when it comes to personalilty but I think you did a fair job of what I imagne her to be like.

I have never heard of Fuu before, but this made me feel like I knew her. XD

I liked number 3 especially..the implication that she might be related to Kakuzu is great.

Well done, as usual.