 angellwings 2009-09-03 . chapter 1Okay, this was awesome! You even made Bart a Diniver supporter! YAY! this was perfect for Bart. Him being so far away, and having all the angst and not even letting Oliver finish his sentence. It's perfect. Bart would, of course, avoid anything about Chloe making a lifetime commitment. it's fine when she dates because that's not so permenent, but marriage would definately sting for him. This is being favorited! great work! |