Really good.

I love the fight between Erik and Stark and Erik is such a...DOUCHEBAG and Lovely story Btw. :D xx

keep updating i cant wait for the next chapter!

Okay, I'm sorry, but what the hell? This made no sense. You have amazing writing potential, but this chapter is kinda stupid. I don't think you have the write idea of what PC and Kristen were looking for when they wrote the House of Night series. I had to force myself through it. My advice would be to work out details, and maybe stretch this out a bit more. It would be a lot better that way, I think :) Don't let me stop you from writing!

ur doing really good and i love the story idea, I'm just a little confused on who is talking when. just a friendly tip. good luck and keep writing!:)

omg! you have to keep writing! like NOW hahaha that was really good!

plz upload soon! :D :D :D :D

your story is amazing!

your writing is awesome but you suck god you haven't wrote in over 3 months gosh

Aw. okay my favorite one in the whole house of night series my favorite is Stark. HEHEHE! so if anyone writes one I'll read. But I really like this one.

GREAT FanFic! I like it! Keep up the good work! :) Can't wait for an update!

Update update update! these are so good!

plz sumone update

i like this story keep it up its awsome

i ve got to say its preetty good i dont think zoey would do it with stak tat easily but sitll i just want to find out wat happens im still not a big fan of it

I really like this keep writing PLEASE PLEASE PLEAS