I absolutely loved your story. I hope you keep writing.

Wow what a wild ride enjoyed it very much and a good sci fi story to lots of speculation. Victor is my favorite character also so I liked that the story focused on him so much. The asteroid hive was actually pretty realistic in a lot of ways very reminiscent of what happiness when you stumble across a bunch of bugs and gradually become aware of them attacking you be they sand fleas or ants.

Very interesting concept, and it made a great story.