amazingly cute story! I loved Estelle's attempts! I liked how you wrote her and Yuri's character, very good at keeping them in character! Keep up the good work!

Orangepotato

so god =D you understood perfectly the relationship between yuri and estelle ! the shy love between them is just to cute ! AWW I luv it !! can you do a next chapter ? That would be awersomme ! thanx very very much !!

omg lol love it especally that last line it was lmfao

Hahaha, so cute! And very much in-character, good job!

Short, sweet and hilarious. Love it ^^ Here's to wishing you write more fic with this pairing Xd

Hilarious!

Spotting the description, I knew this would be either really good, or really bad- I'm very glad to say it was in fact, good.
The entire piece is very.. Estelle.

So often I see, or hear, people misjudge her ignorance to the world as her being stupid, rather than just unaware. I'm very happy to see that that was not case here.

Personally, I prefer longer reading, but that's not really an issue as the piece is perfectly fine for what it is. That said, you certainly seem to have a feel for the characters, so if you ever feel the inspiration to write more I think you should give a shot.

Aside from that, I did not catch any typos, nor punctuation issues (though, admittedly, I don't readily search out them out), so I suppose I'm finished here.

Cheers to you on the good piece.

lol. she wants to practice on yuri. XD, if anyone else heard that, they'd think something dirty. XP, favs

LOL. THIS is WORTH faving. (I hope to see more from you XD)

Very nice. Estelise is cute. Just the rare character I can come to like in the weaky-prissy (if that's even a word) girl role.