Man, that was GREAT! Exactly what I would expect their first time to be like.

"I just shagged you."

"I know, Ron, I was there."

XD

Aw. That was quite lovely, and really well written :)

Realistic...nicely done :)

This was really cute and well written
Ron and Hermione acted like themselves and Ron acted adorable

i'd leave you a review on checkmated already, but it deserves one here too. I LOVED your story. seriously.
well done girl. very realistic and cute and fun and lots of more good things, hehehe.

one of the best (if not the best) ron&hermione first time fics.

thank you very much = ]

This was utter brilliance.

Amazing. Loved it. ^^ Ron was hilarious.

fantastic - true to character - not sleezy - perfect.
We're supposed to give a "well-rounded" critique but I don't have any criticisms...that was very good, my friend.

That was so perfectly them. I haven't read much HP FF because it's so hard for people to get the characters right but this was great. Well done!

“Yes. Please. **. Hermione,” she said.
--I love that this is coming from proper Hermione. Hilarious, and at the same time, so very sweet!


“I just shagged you,” he said, as if this was news.
She couldn't help but laugh. “I know, Ron. I was there.”

--LMAO. I love them together. And I like that she was honest with him - at least he'll know to take care of her next time first. Yay for RH!

I love this story, and I love you! You are awesome. This is so incredibly sweet, and realistic, and so THEM. I'm in love!

That was amazing! It really was. Too funny! You should, like, reward yourself. Go get a cookie. :]

aw... this is so beautiful and well written! great work, I really loved it, I can't imagine it any other way and I'm glad to see you've put it down on paper... well, screen. :D

Wow, very detailed and very hot. I loved how goofy he was at the end, and how that was just part of who they were.

Really really good! please write more. I think this might just be my favorite fanfic so far.

saw this at checkmated and loved it - great story