 xushi 2009-09-15 . chapter 1This was so cute!
Orihime seemed almost forgotten about on LiveJournal when her birthday rolled around so it was great to see this written.
Uryuu always seems sort of bashful around her, and I think that was portrayed really well in this ficlet. |
 Lady Maple 2009-09-05 . chapter 1I have found the following typo:
Heartily kipping past a tree
Sorry if I missed any typos, but your writing is wonderful even if you deny it~ nipaa~ |
 ShiraFuneHakuteiken 2009-09-04 . chapter 1I love this soo much! Great job! |
 kurou-chan 2009-09-03 . chapter 1Woo. . . Ishime, nice story. |
 CurlyHairedDemon 2009-09-03 . chapter 1 GUAH I love this so much! Great job as usual! |