Wow I'm really liking this story! Hey can I make a suggestion though? Plz don't be mad. I just think you should make the chapters longer. But I'm only saying this because they r so good! I just don't want them to end! Great writing! Can't wait for next chapter! Looking forward to it!

I think it was really good an cant wait for the next chapter :)

Easy: Love it of course XD

Cool, so who's she? I look forward to finding out. Write more, 'kay?

I like it. It has an interesting first two chapters. I think you should keep writing, see where it goes.

Chapter 1: A little corny.

Cheapter 2: Much more interesting than the first.

Don't worry. Whatever you do, it couldn't possibly be worse than the original script!

O.O Me wants moar! XD