I love this story. I'm glad you updated. One of the best jumper stories I've read!

update soon

this is really cool!do update soon!

Seriously? No update for almost three months? Look, I know I just started this today, but I'm totally hooked! Can we have the next chapter please?

Intemeresting :) I rarely come across a fic involving EV, so this was pretty good to find :)

Please continue?

Hydro

update pleaze )
this story is really good

lol shes driving poor griffin insane its so funny!

Ok, I never imagened Griffin having a kid, so... i dunno, hard to get my head around. And i dont want to jump to conclusions. Still, well written and you got Griffins voice really well.

This was a pretty cute chapter. I loved their interaction and how it just seemed natural. Great job. They definitly sounded like their ages. *pie for you* Catch you next chapter.

way excited that you kept this up; I thought this was done already. Can't wait to read what you have coming! :)

oh and with Griff being a bit out of character...I think it would be ok if he was a little bit OOC because he just learned he has a kid, and feels a bit guilty abuot it. Think about it: he not only screws up EV's life be getting her Father killed, but he knocks her up in the process!

Im looking foward to the next chapters. This is the only fic Ive seen that has a Griffin/E.V. slant towards it. I am very intrested ti see what you do with this pairing. Good work on ralizing and trying to correct any odd caracterizations. I love the snippets of the cartoon shows. Try to get in touch with your inner kid, maybe that will help! Hopw you update soon!

Aw. I really like this story. It's cute. They're bonding :)

I'm glad you updated. When's the next one gunna be :D

haha i love it!

update soon please!

-Luna Carter

Please tell me this isn't it! This is turning into a great story. I love it so far and I can't wait to read whatever comes next. I hope you continue it. But, I think it's great. I think that Riley is probably a little too smart for her own good, but if I think of myself at that age, I was pretty smart too, so she's very believable. But this is a most excellent story so far. Can't wait to read more. *hands over a basket of mystery food* You just think of a specific food that you want and it'll turn into that. Have fun! And I hope your writer's block goes away!