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seghen
2009-09-17 . chapter 1
I don't even watch WoWP but I love this story. I feel a bit sick for supporting incest but what can I say? It was beautiful!
The Brat Prince
2009-09-13 . chapter 1
So good. Words can't even express how amazing this is. It made my day seeing this in my inbox. Agh. Love it. I do wish that it extended- not multi-chapter- but at least ran through the later years. Still, the entire thing was beautiful. Great job.
xJamey
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
Beautiful writing :)

I don't normally support incest, but Selena and David's chemistry onscreen make me wish that stupid ol' Disney didn't make them siblings! I mean, they kind of have this knack of choosing actors that have so much chemistry and put them as siblings. Blaahh. :P

Anyhoo, I really loved this, the way you wrote it was just perfect. :)

Write more soon. :)
ew
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
come on they are brother and sister

incest is gross
PrettyGirlRocks
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
very well written! good job!
qtkitten13
2009-09-05 . chapter 1
Absolutely perfect as a one-shot! Well done.
amazing as usual
2009-09-05 . chapter 1
Wow, I thought because I already knew how it'd end it wouldn't captivate me as much as the original story. Boy was I wrong! By the second paragraph I was pulled into this world all over again & it was just as good as the first story.

Amazing oneshot! I love love love how you write the Jalex relationship & hope you continue writing for this fandom. You are definetely one of the best authors we have in this community & eagerly await reading your Jalex stories.
mayfair22
2009-09-05 . chapter 1
You don't have to through the whole thing again...(actually you can because I would still read it) because just as it was ; was perfect...:)
yurface9311
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
this is very good :)
but for some reason i prefer Justin's POV
tania-1416
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
Amazing!
I loved it
:)
Great job Bye
ponderer
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
Loved this!

Absolutely loved this!
KathrynAV
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
Woah.
I can't articulate properly how happy I am that you decided to finish this. You brought a whole new element to the story.

I mean, I could have concluded that Alex was going through something like this while reading 'days' (no idea it started so soon for her though) but to actually see the thought process just made it all more heart-wrenching. Beautiful, beautiful piece. It showed us where Alex was coming from in the beginning..which we can really only draw our own conclusions on in 'days'.

And omg...the mirror scene:

"His eyes finally meet hers-clear grey locked onto her own deep brown and it hits her (why its taken this long, she’ll never know) just how different they’ve always, always, been and will always be.

Justin is by the book where she’s whichever way the wind blows. Night and day.

Two things that never, ever, exist in the same moment."

God that was PERFECT and clever and had a climactic quality to it. It actually made me stop and go "oh..wow."

But yeah, to wrap it up, you know I LOVED it. It was seriously amazing.
JesterDala
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
I just got finished with the first installment from Justin's POV last night. I stayed up until 3AM, moved to tears by the story. Overjoyed does not begin to describe my feeling on seeing that you're adding to the experience by including Alex's viewpoint. I can't thank you enough for this bittersweet, sad, beautiful addition to the fandom.
anditgoeslike
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
"days were slipping past" was one of the better fics, let alone Jalex/WOWP, I've read recently and this just made it all the more better. I don't know, I'm a big emotional mess today but I loved seeing their situation through Alex's eyes. Loved the thoughts going through her mind, been there before, and loved the fact that with such a heady topic you really came through with a proper Alex characterization. I'm just all *cries* over this.

yo-mtvraps. (that's how I commented before!)
Skippyssqueeze
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
it is well written.. its just odd being that it is her older brother...
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