I really liked it, being a huge chlavis fan in all its incarnations. so

CUUTTEE. XD

Best story EVAH! UPLOAD!1!1!1!

No, just kidding, I know you don't like to hear ''Upload''. So, I thought it was well written, as usual, but I must say that it might not be much of a parody... No offence, but most parodies are supposed to be funny and be at a certain distance from the real story. I was a bit short, but I can't really blame you. I do wonder what will happen to this couple. Also, even though I do not know much about Smallville, it seems to me like she Chloe sincerely loves Davis, which I thought was kind of sweet... And maybe unusual coming from you? Well, continue your writing, you are doing a really good job!

That's dark but I prefer it to what happened in the series.

Lol, kind of funny, but I really liked it.