loved it

Absolutely beautiful! i wanted to cry T.T

lovely, really really touching and very well written, both of them.

Awesome chapter2! Please write a third chapter!XDD

D':
so sad...

yay! another chapter!
i love the style of this story! and yes, you SHOULD add a third chapter! this story is amazing!

...I'm confused on what's happening...Could you clarify it for me a bit?

Is Light and L in Mu? They're spirits, and they fade away, forgetting their sense of selves?

Or are the being reincarnated (like the cycles you mentioned), but before they are reincarnated, they have to lose all their memories so that they don't bring the memories with them to their next life.

@_@ So confused.

~Isamu

It's true that it's not the most logical setting, but even Mark Twain is afraid of ghosts. I realy love all the decriptions of scenery. At first it was implied that L doesn't remember anything, but now there's proof that there's something left at the back of his mind. However, the way I see it is that Lighto gave both of them peace of mind. Would it hurt him to do something genuinely good for once? Well, I happy that L's content. And if I see a ghost as cute as L wondering around, I'll make sure to takle-hug him no matter whether I believe in ghosts or not X) Anyway, I'm realy happy you decided to continue it! Thank you and please keep up the awesome work!

It's a punishment I hope Light gets for the pain he inflicted on so many people. Karma bites in the ass, literally. I feel so bad for Sayu and Sachiko. Innocents harmed in a game they didn't even know they were playing.

This. is. AMAZING. o.o Oh my God, this has to be the best one-shot I've ever read-- EVER. It's brilliant, so sad, and it really connects with the reader, you know? ): It made me want to cry... D: It was so beautiful, though. I loved how it was composed and written, it all flowed and was put together very nicely. I have endless praise for this, really. (:

Love,
Alice Danielle

It left me without words. Really beautiful and terribly sad.

Omg. I can totally see why you cried. I'm honestly trying not to! hahaha er else my mom will look at me weird n' probably call me bi-polar or something hahah

WOW! just WOW! I really loved it. That's when we wish time would rewind itself-just so Light could try to do things differently this time

OMG! i didn't cryy... but I'm about to :( that was so sad... me sry light! :)

I am realy mad at Lighto. He got what he deserved and he dare complain?! It's alwasys about him. I don't feel sorry for him at all. I feel sorry for Sayu and a little sad for Sachiko but not for him. *In a mocking voice* "Wah! I don't want to feel anything. Wah! I wish I didn't take that for granted. Wah! L thinks I'm Kira. Wah! L doesn't even know who I am." Yes, Lighto, you deserve it! I liked the parts where he had to watch Sayu. Sayu is suffering because of you, Lighto! Feel guilty already! You know what? I don't think he even apologized. Even dead, he can't be sorry for what he did. I wish his dad was there to lecture him and make him feel even more shame. Yeah, that's what I think aabout this fic. You could take that as me loving it, by hating on Lighto. It's not your fault he's such a whiny baby.

This is quite depressing, but really good. I am sorry to hear about your cousin.

I feel so bad for Light in this story. Especially with the last line. You did a wonderful job, on this story.