Finally finished the whole story! Thank you for your talents and your willingness to share them with all of us. The hope and faith that you inspire and illustrate in your story is beautifully romantic! I found the flow of the story was remarkable and the writing to be exquisite. Brave writers know that they must be true to what they know and understand. Pleased that you took the risk and wrote such a tradional, yet untraditional, fiction in the genre.
J

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beautiful story i enjoyed it alot, i laughed,cried,it just was awsome story. no violence thats good. i love to read a good story once in awile that doesnt result in violece so congrats on a beautiful story. keep up good work.

What an absolute beautiful story. Thank you, I loved it.

Enchanted by your story, Madame. It's truly lovely to read something that is fresh and family friendly, so far. Verbally summarizing this story and sharing it with my pre-teen son. He could stand to use some Cannabean manners. Lovely story.
J

A very god story... Congratulation!

This story is way beyond good and I'm reading it for the second time.

Wow, this was a really different kind of story than what I normally read. I really enjoyed it. It took some getting used to, reading and understanding their beliefs and customs, but it was interesting. Great job!

I found this story heartwarming, passionate, and enlightening upon my own relationship. Thank you. Keep up the amazing work!

Poor Edward. His family's so unsupportive in almost everything. One moment i think they're just looking out for him,the next i'm thinking "you son of a bitch...". Whiplash, i tell ya. Loved the way you made Bella stand up for herself. Its good to be reminded that she's still a fiery spirit, despite her calm and docile demeaner. Thumbs up!

Jeez Bella, grow a backbone. No wonder he snaps at you, you make yourself an easy target. Edward just keeps on pushing my buttons. If he's really in love maybe he should contemplate, oh I don't know, talking to her. This kind of relationship shouldn't be tolerated at all. And i'm not even a feminist, if thats what anyone's wondering.

Yay, Bella's going to finish the course! Still unfair that Ed's making her give up teaching. I've been an portuegese tutor for years, and I love it. Taking away a passion is completely...ugh! I have no words to justify such a situation. I'm glad to see that Edward is happier though.

Yes! I mean, boo for Edward, but I WAS RIGHT! Damn, didn't know Alice could be so cruel. I would totally shun her and Jazz if they were my family. Even if it is love, she should have never lead him on. What. . Still...I WAS RIGHT!

Ok. You've provided the clues and final answer is...Edward and Alice courted,but she fell in love or had sex or broke of the engagement for Jasper. I'm almost positive! Man, what a captivating story. Very curious about how this is going to play out. Edward's really self-centered though. I hope Bella doesn't let him push her around so much in the future. Him and Charlie are really pissing me off.

Such a wonderful story. I loved it, thank you so much.