I have never, in my life here on FF, ever read such a story. It was truly amazing. A work of art. You're such a beautiful writer, it's incredible. I was locked into this story, so enchanting, so dark. Truly unbelievable. I loved every word.

Moony,

The way you write this is just fffffffffffffffff. I finally got around to reading this and my mind is blown! HAGS should be cannon. Oh gods.

I love you Moony.

Hey loved this part of hide and seek saga, so dark, it's wonderful. I wanted to view the picture but i am having trouble getting access to it, has it been taken down?

This is so terribly beautiful and entrancing... I've never been so impressed by any author or story or... anything, really. I feel like I should be crying, and I'm sure if I were to have read this any other time but three in the morning I would be. I really wish it wasn't three in the morning so I could more specifically tell you how amazing this is, but all I can say right now is that you, madam, are incredible.

*hyperventilates*

For the love of everything that is holy AND unholy, that was simply astounding! I've always wondered what it would be like if Sebastian was actually the real father of Ciel, and you've exceeded my expectations. The sex was so sinfully taboo considering their familial relations, but it fit the story. Ah, this is just amazing. Just...guhh.

My love for this delightedly twisted stew of demonic happenings has only increased with reading it anew.

Sebastian was Ciel's father?

... Somehow, that doesn't want to sit well with me. XD

Apart from that, though, the whole construction of the fic was good, your writing, as I once said, is wonderful, and the two are awfully in character D

and, yeah, that's why I'll read the rest of that series. I'm really interested on how this is continued

(It's kind of a good thing that this series is already finished.I don't have to wait for updates XDD)

?...

That was...f*cking amazing. O.O

How long have you been writing? Just curious.

Holy crap... that was twisted an awesome. Unbelievably twisted but still so awesome. And the final words "Now your It" were... WOW!

Seriously, this is a perfect piece of how incredible a story can be.

Okay so...whats with (the random) parenthesis everywhere.

In this sentence

"Sebastian offered him a look of genuine, (albeit faintly wounded,) affection."

You could have done

"Sebastian offered him a look of genuine, albeit faintly wounded, affection."

And it would still make sense. You used the odd parenthesis all through the story, and it was just words in the sentence.

Cool story blah, blah, blah nice writing. I like it. :)

Pardon my ranting...

I feel wonderfully blessed to have found your writings so late at night. This was one of my favorites that you've written - well thought out and clever right to the bitter end. Ciel's development is possible one of the best of any character's that I've ever seen in any fanfiction, and Sebastian's toying with him until death did them part was extremely well done. The structure of the story and incorporation of hide and seek was fantastic; the grammar and language and the effects of your style and moremoremore of the perfect metaphors and realizations felt like they were the missing pieces that made a good story spectacular. Also, in a less relevant side note, I thought the breaks between sections were well-placed.

That was gorgeous, and so mysterious. I loved it, and it was beautifully written!

You had me confused for a lot of it, but once I reach the conclusion I wasn't that surprised, as if you'd just gracefully implied it for the entire oneshot. Your writing style is truly brilliant! And I loved all the fairy tail references as well! .

You ended it perfectly as well, as if the story just... went to sleep...

Chir x

Oh my GOD. my mind is blown.

Oh My GOD! I am in love with your brain...yes I said it. You are an awesome author! This was simply mind blowing!

What a turn of eve?ts. Exciting Captivating and keeps the reader Guessing. Truely lovely...