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2009-09-19 . chapter 1
I can understand why James would want to feel like he still mattered to Sirius. Very sweet.
forbalathegreen
2009-09-15 . chapter 1
yay, that was really good^^
NOGOODTSUNA
2009-09-09 . chapter 1
This made me go aw for like a minuit my mum was staring at me like I was crazy,I just laughed.
PopstarJ01
2009-09-09 . chapter 1
So sweet! Absolutely love how Sirius looks to James for approval and how James is worried that he won't be important to Sirius anymore. Wonderful job! Post again soon please :-)

~Jane
Catium
2009-09-08 . chapter 1
Hmm...this was a very angst fillen story. For a second there I was afraid you were making jealous in more than a friendly way, if you know what I'm saying. And in the end I was really really sad...this wasn't the end of the Marauders that much is true but it isn't long after that that the end comes. With James dying and all that so I was really sad in the end. I also smiled a lot because in some ways it's a really cute story.
But like always you managed to stir all these emotions in my with just one little story and like always I love it;)
Catium
purplepanties
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
Aww..I went through the same thing when my best friend got a boyfriend...we didnt get a happy ending like these guys tho :(
Great story tho, it was really sweet.
I love how James got all jealous because his best friend found someone...i think thats heaps cute :)
Cant wait for more stuff from you!

Anda
~PurplePanties~
Ms. Marauder-Cullen
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
AW! This was so sweet! I loved how it was from James POV and that Sirius was asking for permission about the relationship with Remus. Also James feelings in this were very true to how I picture him feeling. I especially liked the last few lines. :)
Renai-chan
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
How sweet =)
Freack
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
Somehow very sad. Good work.
VampiressBlack
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
Aw that was sweet, it's nice to see how James handles the pups relationship and I liked that he was jelous of the new bond as close friends are when people get new partners, it was very well played out. The silent conversation between Sirius and James was lovely and not too awkward.

loved it! x x x x x x x x x x
Draug419
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
I liked this follow-up! And I think it's well-enough written that your readers don't neccesarily have to read To Kiss First in order to understand this one. Another well-done fic!
-Draug-
sierra's scarlet
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
Ah, very cute. I really love Peter's reaction. You made him kind, which is something that fits well. As for James, you struck the perfect chord with him being jealous over losing the center of Sirius' affections. And the ending was just sweet. Loved it ^_^
fuzzyalligator
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
Cute! I'm glad we got to see that James wasn't perfectly happy they were together. It was actually kind of cute that he was jealous of them but also glad for them.

Sarah :3
almondcrescent
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
Aww, I LOVED it! Of course I always say that about your fics, but I'm in love with James's jealousy and his insecurity and fears about the Marauder's future. Oh, it was brilliant and lifted my mood despite the sorrow/worry/melancholy. And the 'happy ending' (although kind of short-lived if we consider their future :() makes it very lovely. Looking forward to the next one, whatever it will be and whenever I'll get to read it...
Alexandros Black
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
Of course this wouldn't be the Marauders' end, how could James even consider such a thing? Silly James :)

Thanks!
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