 Forever Young 2009-11-19 . chapter 3Oh my gosh, this story's good too! I only clicked it in intrest but I'll keep reading, yes I vaguely recall at least the first episode of Invader Zim, enough to follow anyway and even if I found the show ok I will admit this seems like the perfect crossover idea! Anyway I'll be following this story too :) |
 Maran Zelde 2009-11-11 . chapter 3I love that Stitch was the one who said "Alien!" Irony. XD Dib's not around, but at least Jumba and Stitch are there to keep Zim on his toes. I wonder if Lilo will "turn Zim to good" or if Zim will stay a megalomaniac.
I love this exchange: "So...how'd ya get here, Zim?" "Spaceship." "Oh, okay." LOL Pleakley's so gullible.
And Zim told the truth about being banished and didn't know it! Nice.
I read the other reviews and I think "racist" is fine, since I doubt a six year-old would know a term like "speciesist," even a bright one like Lilo. |
 smileyfox148 2009-11-09 . chapter 3YAY! CHAPTER! GREAT STORY! LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE all the way to the Massive. XD Thank you! |
 nightmaster000 2009-11-08 . chapter 3Great chapter loved zim's first meeting with lilo and stitch just can't wait to see what lilo and zim opinons and thought's are it should to prove to interesting not mention what zim will think of the other exeperiment's will he tell the tallest about or what keep up the good update soon |
 SamaelangelxDevi1Admon 2009-11-06 . chapter 3Nice vocicals for Pleakley; really got his thoughts patterns right.
If I may make a suggestion, I think the term is "speciesist" and not "racist." Racism is prejudice against a body of people due to their ethic/cultural/skin pigmentation. Speciesism is prejudice against a body of people due their their species.
When you have Jumba say "I know what you are doing," do you mean that he knows what Zim is planning for the planet Earth, or is how he is able to persuade Pleakley so easily to accept his existence and place on the Earth; and if so, why did Pleakley submit so easily? Did Zim use something similar to Tak's mind-control device? And if that's the case, then I suppose its predictable that it would work on Pleakley: he really isn't the sharpest tool in the shed, after all. Not as stupid as the humans in the orignal Invader Zim universe, but still quite foolish. |
 ngrey651 2009-11-06 . chapter 3It's funny how easily Jumba's like "Oh, Irken. TIME TO DIE". He has a contingency plan for EVERY species, it seems like. And it really is cute to see Zim being taught to shake hands. :D I really liked this chappie. |
 avatarjk137 2009-11-06 . chapter 3Well, this will be an interesting situation for Zim. I can't wait to see how this differs from his time antagonizing Dib's city, and what happens when Gantu and Hamsterviel turn up to upset the equilibrium further. |
 nightmaster000 2009-11-01 . chapter 2okay this is looking to be a great story i hope you update again soon i just have a couple of question's one are Dib and Gaz going to be in this fic i hope not whale i have no problem with them i hope you just put Zim and other character in this fic so Zim doesn't have to deal with Dib also since in your other fic's it's looking like their Dib/Lilo i was wondering if you could make this fic a Zim/Lilo because not only would that be interesting it would change the pace and finally are Lilo and Stitch going to be enemies or allies with Zim in this fic that's all keep up the great work and update soon please. |
 L 2009-10-12 . chapter 2 update soon. |
 Maran Zelde 2009-10-04 . chapter 2I love Stitch's POV, especially when he thinks "Didn't dogs not talk?" Good point. XD
So Moses saw Zim and called Nani right away. I guess he's not as dense as he acts; he's probably just too polite to point out anything weird.
Don't you mean irkopomorphize? ^^; |
 SamaelangelxDevi1Admon 2009-10-04 . chapter 2Nice chapter, glad you updated so quickly for a chapter this long, and hope that the next chapter comes up as quickly, if not sooner. |
 avatarjk137 2009-10-03 . chapter 2And, already Zim's mission takes a turn for the interesting. And the part from Stitch's POV was excellent. Good work! |
 Count Nightmare 2009-09-15 . chapter 1 Um hi er i`d just like to say i`m sorry its suddenly ocurred to me Zim/Tak might not have been the best phrase. Instead you could simply call it Zim x Tak or better yet ZATR its choice i`m really sorry i didn`t mean to offend anyone whatsoever. |
 Count Nightmare 2009-09-13 . chapter 1 Hi i`ve just reread this chapter and you know whats just hit me? It involves Dr Hamsterviel this is just my theory it doesn`t nessearily mean this is the case. I BELIEVE THAT DR HAMSTERVIEL IS AN EXPERIMENT!
REASONS
He speaks Tantalog Tantalog is the language that Stitch and most of the other Experiments speak.
His accent he has a strange accent just like some other Experiments
His species Gantu doesn`t seem to know his species maybe because he`s one of a kind.
As you might be able to see there are too many simularites for comfort. If by some chance that this is true then maybe its possible that he can be rehabilitated just like all the other Experiments. I just i would add this well see ya until next time. BYE! |
 Count Nightmare 2009-09-13 . chapter 1 Well this is a good fanfic so far. If you are making a rewrite of the Lilo and Stitch Series and the movies. Then are you going to make Gantu and Zim good just like in Leroy and Stitch? I hope so it seems so rare in just about every Invader Zim fanfic that i have read in the past he`s always the villain it just doesn`t seem fair. And that leads me to another question if you are making a rewrite then what will happen to Zim at the end? I think it would be best if he just stayed on Earth considering the fact that everyone on Planet Irk seems to hate his guts. Also i was wondering if your going to put Tak into this story Tak is this female Irk who has a grudge against Zim. Since you seem to know the show so well i`m just going to presume you know about her. Anyway i was just wondering if you do put her in it could you please make it a Zim/Tak i love that pairing so munch i know that in the show they both hate each other but i cant help it i don`t know how she gets on Earth maybe her ship crash lands there by accident maybe the Tallest sent her there to keep an eye on Zim and to keep him from getting back to Planet Irk or she could just go to earth herself to get revenge on Zim like she did in the show ether way its your choice. If you do make it then thank you. Ill be keeping a very very close eye on this fanfic from now on until you make the next chapter until then see ya good luck and happy writing. |