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Luiz4200
2009-11-22 . chapter 11
Was it really necessary to erase Marnie's memory? I'd like to have her being told more of the magical world. Will it become a standard? Some non-magical acquaintance learning about the magical world and then forgetting it? In that case, I suggest Brad for the next fic. Why didn't you let the dragons learn who the woman is?
Luiz4200
2009-11-16 . chapter 10
Is the Huntsclan theory correct? Is that woman the Huntsmaster's daughter? Please update.
Luiz4200
2009-11-06 . chapter 9
Why did she go to Lockjelly? She should have gone to the Longs. Please update. Will Jonathan live?
Luiz4200
2009-10-29 . chapter 8
Hehehehehehehehehehe. So, it all began with a non-magical crime? Nice twist. Please update. Who's the one who helped Lockjelly? Some relative of the Huntsmaster?
Luiz4200
2009-10-20 . chapter 7
Great chapter. It was sweet of Jake to do it for his Dad. And it was nice to see how much Jonathan cares for his family. Please update. Will Jonathan really visit Mr. Lockjelly's dream?
Luiz4200
2009-10-12 . chapter 6
Please update. Will Jake use the dream charm?
Luiz4200
2009-10-06 . chapter 5
Please update. Will they tell about Stan being a troll?
Luiz4200
2009-09-30 . chapter 4
Please update. Will Patchouli learn the truth?
Luiz4200
2009-09-20 . chapter 3
Please update. Is Jonathan a magical creature?
Zaara Lahana.P
2009-09-12 . chapter 2
awesome story!
update as fast and soon as u can:D
DYlogger
2009-09-10 . chapter 2
Isn't it "oh my GOSH", not oh my goth?
Luiz4200
2009-09-10 . chapter 2
Please update. You're good with mysteries.
Luiz4200
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
Please update. Is Jake going to be exposed?
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