 Luiz4200 2009-11-22 . chapter 11Was it really necessary to erase Marnie's memory? I'd like to have her being told more of the magical world. Will it become a standard? Some non-magical acquaintance learning about the magical world and then forgetting it? In that case, I suggest Brad for the next fic. Why didn't you let the dragons learn who the woman is? |
 Luiz4200 2009-11-16 . chapter 10Is the Huntsclan theory correct? Is that woman the Huntsmaster's daughter? Please update. |
 Luiz4200 2009-11-06 . chapter 9Why did she go to Lockjelly? She should have gone to the Longs. Please update. Will Jonathan live? |
 Luiz4200 2009-10-29 . chapter 8Hehehehehehehehehehe. So, it all began with a non-magical crime? Nice twist. Please update. Who's the one who helped Lockjelly? Some relative of the Huntsmaster? |
 Luiz4200 2009-10-20 . chapter 7Great chapter. It was sweet of Jake to do it for his Dad. And it was nice to see how much Jonathan cares for his family. Please update. Will Jonathan really visit Mr. Lockjelly's dream? |
 Luiz4200 2009-10-12 . chapter 6Please update. Will Jake use the dream charm? |
 Luiz4200 2009-10-06 . chapter 5Please update. Will they tell about Stan being a troll? |
 Luiz4200 2009-09-30 . chapter 4Please update. Will Patchouli learn the truth? |
 Luiz4200 2009-09-20 . chapter 3Please update. Is Jonathan a magical creature? |
 Zaara Lahana.P 2009-09-12 . chapter 2awesome story!
update as fast and soon as u can:D |
 DYlogger 2009-09-10 . chapter 2Isn't it "oh my GOSH", not oh my goth? |
 Luiz4200 2009-09-10 . chapter 2Please update. You're good with mysteries. |
 Luiz4200 2009-09-06 . chapter 1Please update. Is Jake going to be exposed? |