Very sweet, nicely done

GAH. Minato and Kushina's story is one of my favorites and you do justice to it. What I most love about your fic is the characterization: that, while Minato is a genius, he doesn't know everything and Kushina teaches him that. Truly lovely.

Awwwwwww...

That is the most intelligent thing I can make up right now that describes this oneshot. What a great background fic.

Oh wow, just wow. This short was spectacular in a simple, unassuming way - it left me totally captivated and breathless. I love what Kushina says to Minato :"Climb higher in the system then," so simply, so directly. We now know from what happened in the manga that Yondaime credits her for making him into a Hokage, and I can just imagine this type of conversation happening in the canon Naruto-verse. You are an amazing writer, with cutting prose and amazing depth of insight. I hope you keep writing!

Nice one. It was lyrical and just flowed very naturally, especially in the last few parts. The first part was a bit choppy, though.

just wow! i love it :D

Wonderful bite- size pieces of nostalgic biscuits...

*m...

crunchy ... realisticly so... *

Ooh, I like this very much. It's an interesting take on the way they met, and I love how you manage to mix sorrow and solemnity with love and longing. Bravo!

interesting style of writing

it worked really well with the story

i liked the way their relationship developed, i found it very nice to read

great job, really. i agree with you totally, i wanna know more about kushina!

amazing story, i love it :)

That was cute, fantastic job, i loved it :)

Cute story, I really liked it. It's something different in a while, most minakushi stories are about important parts in their lives or how they met and so on, yours is more like watching from a bit farther position. Great work :D

I really enjoyed this! (:

I wish we knew a little more about Kushina, but Kishimoto must be holding the information back for a reason, but this is really cute. I really like the second point-of-view of this story and it really does fits in quite flawlessly.

I hope you write more Minato/Kushina stories!

-Moonfayth