I was smiling so much at the end :D

My feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeels

Damn you write good! This is writte so well! If I was younger I would be so confused but I'm not. Keep writing because you can eally write! XD I wish I could write like that. Where did you learn?

This was quite poetic, but although I'm not sure what happened at the end. Is it for the readers' imagination? Still, very nice.

A little bit confusing, but good all the same.

(_)... Yay! I love the way you portrayed them. They were... wild, crazed, and so in denial, and you brought them together. You did. And you did well. You did them justice, and that's just awesome. By the way, you're a good writer!

How fitting for both of them. An excetional oneshot. :) I think you captured their dark nature very well.