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Reviews for: Darrin in Toyland
Vee22
2009-11-08 . chapter 5
An absolutely hilarious chapter! I loved it. =) Everyone sounds very much in character.

There are a few spelling mistakes and/or typos that could've been avoided with proofreading. However, it's a great story so far and I look forward to reading the next chapter when you have time to update. =)
Arfies
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
Is this a Bewitched Fan Fiction Contest submission? If so, just add "BFFCS" to the description. Thanks!
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