that was good

Kenshin/Battousai's thoughts when he's alone from the rest...sooo mysterious and VERY VERY good! I like the way which you use those mysterious 'words' to write...it would JUST be the way Kenshin/ Battousai would be thinking!

oooooo so this IS the story u wrote for the compo! Heez..im so blur... ]

wow, not bad, write more ficcies, espically AS ones :)

WOOOOOOOOO NICE!

arg... I can't write this well... ahh... oh well...

I LIKE IT!

ITS AN AWSOME FIC

matt

Yoz...this is your betta reader here..I'm preetty sure you knoe who I am...anyways..this is quite an ok ficc...write betters ones ok?

Donna ! Ok... I am gonna kill u first if u get higher than me for this, and if I don't then I defiantely will kill myself for not thinking of this first. Damn... you...

Now for the flame. WHY on earth did you hafto put the my fault in caps ? nothing better to do isit ?

Hmm. On second thought it actually is quite good... why ! why must the earth be sooo unfair ! *sniff* donna no baka.

Anyway... man this really is a good fic... I no heart to flame u liao... argh. Damn u anyway.

*too lazy to sign in* that was sweet... i hate thinking of his sadness... i would not have been able to bear it... but, he lived for her, and that i can understand... the one thing he could promise her...

U bloody actually did it! Sigh...tot u didn't have the guts to do it...Anyway i wrote the last paragraph didn't i...rite?

So...sad...I write that kind of stuff all the time, too...though normally not for school...but during it because I get bored...anyways...That was really good! If your teacher gives you anything below a 100%, I'll personally assassinate him/her myself...maa...do tell what you get on it...and what was the actual assignment?...maa...I ask too many questions...that was good! Keep it up!

*SOB* That was so sad! But it really got into Battousai's thoughts... say, what did you get on the essay?