My favorite part was Peter tackling Edmund. It's exactly what I would picture him doing. :D

It was a sad story because they all died, But it was well writen and I noticed pretty much no mistakes if any at all, Well done, S.Sim.

still like this, why the name change? reuploading your stuff must be a bore

I absolutely loved it! Completely different from all of the stories like this. I loved the train engineerer part the most. Well done! :D

Now that I'm reading it for the second time, I love it even more! The way you have ensured that your facts are right before writing the fic makes me so happy. People generally get confused when it comes to The Last Battle. Narnia forever! You have portrayed the seven of them very admirably,and I wish to see more of your writings.
By the way, you're style of writing is just fine - evryone has their own special way of expressing things!
Well done. Keep up the good work! :)

Oh my, I really liked this. I think you did a great job!
I don't know what you mean about your writing style; I thought it was very good. It's much clearer than some other writing styles :) I wonder if your being a man has anything to do with it. Anyway, it’s fantastic to read Narnian fiction written by a guy (I’d think that since Lewis was male too, there would be more men writing stories about the world of Narnia than women), especially one who writes well; it almost fits better into the Narnian world, somehow.

But in reference to your story:

It’s neat to see events more from the perspectives of the seven friends of Narnia.

I could really tell that Eustace was really worried when he referred to Jill by her given name!

I loved the fact that Peter was so protective of his brother without even realizing what he was doing; what a great big brother, and in true Peter style!

You seem to know a lot about trains. I liked the way you incorporated the feelings of the conductor; I haven’t seen that done before. I really felt for him. And the way Aslan came to comfort him was a nice touch. It almost brought me to tears.

By the way, I was reading through LB while I was reading your story, and almost everything you wrote coincides with the book. (Very cool!) You seem like a true friend of Narnia; I will definitely have to read more of your work. Please keep writing!