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Insanity's Childe
2010-01-03 . chapter 1
I super loved this story! But it would be great if you could have a sequel(: Maybe a few years on, they meet each other again in a sort of surprising way? Perhaps you could make it that the Order decided to contact the Preventors for help in the war or something, and of course the Preventors send their best or something, anything up to you as long as they meet again in a completely unexpected way(:
FallenHope-Angel
2010-01-02 . chapter 1
that was so cute i loved it! and although heero and harry didn't actually apologize it was sweet that their body language apoogizewed.
Sabaku no Sable
2009-12-08 . chapter 1
i think this needs a sequel. especially since heero just saw them vanish in this air. that would be an interesting thing to explain.
Serry2
2009-10-23 . chapter 1
I do hope that you will consider taking this bad boy up again once your done with AFWTD. I think that it was wonderful and I could just picture Heero going crazy trying to figure out just how he disappeared.

I went to vote for your short story and I have to say that I really did like it. I'm crossing my fingers that you win. Good Luck!
rtistyksyko
2009-10-21 . chapter 1
Aw, that story was so cute. I really think that you should write a sequel to it. When Harry is older and Voldemort is dead... or maybe he's in the thick of things when the Death Eaters started taking over. ^_^ I just want more Harry/Heero interaction.

Beautiful fic. Keep up the great work!
Dahlia Franks
2009-10-15 . chapter 1
I gotta say, your HP Gundam Wing crossovers grabs me by the balls (if i was a boy) and haul my ** in.

This was a delightful read, I loved harry and Heero in this. They were both delightfully in character but you also gave them a refreshing approach that had me putty in your hands!

I loved that you also gave Heero and Duo a bit of a background that wasn't the focus, or main point of the story, but gave Heero's character more growth? Realism? diverse? I dunno, all i do know is that I liked that little tidbit. ^__^

Keep up the great work. I can only beg, and plead, and maybe sacrifice you a baby sheep, that you continue to write Harry Potter and Gundam Wing Crossovers. keep up the great work in whatever you do! I'll keep an eye out on you.

Dahlia
TrenchcoatMan
2009-10-06 . chapter 1
hoo wee, another great story, only i dont see you picking this one up since its a one-shot... you should totally pick this one back up. I need more dammit!

I really enjoyed the cute little relationship they had together, and don't worry, I think you wrote Heero perfectly. Lol, I love how you had Heero and Duo having dated and broken up and having not changed at all over it. Thats soo totally them, Friends - ** -dating - back to friends with no hurt feelings ^^.

I saw only one flaw in this fic, and that since its set in London, laws work differently. Im pretty sure in British law, your guilty until proven innocent. it might not work that way anymore, but im pretty sure it is. So the who asking for his phone call, thats an american thing. but yanno its not really an issue, you see that all the time with americans writing fiction set in different countries.

plus i can nitpick about a couple of misspellings lol ^^ : cackles :

so anyway. I was thinking, i would really like to see more of this. If you wrote chapter two as long as chapter one, you could prolly end it without needing to make it a novel^^. It's just Harry left Heero with enough to go on to prove Sirius' innocence. On the group finds out a little bout magic, and looks into the actual cold case of Sirius' murder, its quite likely people like Quatre and Heero would see the blaring lack of evidence and the obvious mistrial or in their case, lack of a trial and work to get him proven innocent ^^.

come on. dont leave us hangin ^^

anyway ill see ya next time u update Fate worse than death
-TCM
Silvermane1
2009-10-05 . chapter 1
cool
vodoodollz
2009-09-27 . chapter 1
Please continue this, I loved it and I really want to read what happens next!!
TheOneThatIsAddictedToHPfics
2009-09-26 . chapter 1
loved it!
Obscure Stranger
2009-09-24 . chapter 1
It was cute. I really liked it, was totally awesome!
kitannawinter
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
ooh, sequel? please say yes!
BrookMctirre
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
What a great story. I love the interaction between Harry and Heero. I really hope this won't stay a one shot. I see so much potential in this story.

Brook
Kairenayui
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
OMG I totally love it! Update soon! I like the Harry and Herro pairing - there is chemistry.
Fates Illusion
2009-09-18 . chapter 1
Is it possible that you might continue this at another time? Because there's so much potential behind this and I would love to see something more come out of it. Please?
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