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Mello McQueen
2009-09-08 . chapter 1
I kinda get how you feel. I recently burned out on the HP fandom, which is expected after writing it for a few years... and I switched to Supernatural. Everything is new and good, and every single thing I write and read makes me happy. So far.

About this: I don't like Loz either, but I liked him in this. Also, it was nice because he was being so sentimental and all, but then that last line, oh my Gosh, wow that made me shiver.

"He was following Kadaj to their doom and he was laughing." Wow. That's just... POWERFUL. I wish I were as good a writer as you, Robyn-Chan.

Great job! And I'm glad you're writing again!
XbuttonsX
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
He can't catch a lock of Yazoo's hair if he rides in front of him! XD That was realy cute! It was really good, especially for your first FF7 fic. I can't wait for more!

lmao, perhaps my arguement had subconsciously worked on you and you now secretly harbour a liking for Loz. :D That would make me feel really warm and happy inside. :D I still say me and the babyish oaf have a lot in common. :D
Jill
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
Ah, you write Loz well. I liked it.
Bottomfloor
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
Don't know much about the the story but this is an interesting display of humanity btwn the guys ;) And what is a "materia"?
Lozyfan
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
I love too much Loz to imagine him so stupid but it's a beautiful effort of writing, bravo ! ^_-
tsuchifuru
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
How nice to see FFVII from you! (I'm sad that you won't be writing any more Death Note, but still I'm excited to read all you will be writing now; hopefully it will be just as beautiful as your DN fics.)
You captured Kadaj well for a first-ffvii-fanfic. And Yazoo, of course. Keep up the great work.

And welcome, my dear, to the fandom! (tips hat to you)
PenArtist10000
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
You're back! Yay!
Azurela
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
I liked it a lot- I think you captured Loz well. I enjoy his POV.

Very sweet and easy to get into. Good job-
meaniemathnerd
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
LOL Loz is such a little kid with his backpack of crap materia and trash XD
i can imagine him riding a bike all hunched over XD
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