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Reviews for: Fragmented
Rayneken
2009-12-30 . chapter 1
I liked the numbers. Nice touch. Seeing the slow degredation of team seven was awesome! You really captured the downward spiral by keeping everyone in character. Nice job!
imperfect-lover
2009-11-30 . chapter 1
So painful to read the step by step of how they all fell apart. Written very well!
RmfD
2009-11-09 . chapter 1
this was a sad and very true look at this dynamic, very, very nice.
Charged
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
Dramatic and true. At this point in the Manga, the break may be forever. Nice work and drama.
existence555
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
Sad but definitely captures team 7 well
You wrote this very well
Great job, I love it :)
SerenityFrogLuvr3
2009-09-07 . chapter 1
This actually brought tears to my eyes (didn't help that as soon as I start reading James Blunt's 'Goodbye my Lover' starts playing) It's so poignent, good job
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