 Rayneken 2009-12-30 . chapter 1I liked the numbers. Nice touch. Seeing the slow degredation of team seven was awesome! You really captured the downward spiral by keeping everyone in character. Nice job! |
 imperfect-lover 2009-11-30 . chapter 1So painful to read the step by step of how they all fell apart. Written very well! |
 RmfD 2009-11-09 . chapter 1this was a sad and very true look at this dynamic, very, very nice. |
 Charged 2009-09-07 . chapter 1Dramatic and true. At this point in the Manga, the break may be forever. Nice work and drama. |
 existence555 2009-09-07 . chapter 1Sad but definitely captures team 7 well
You wrote this very well
Great job, I love it :) |
 SerenityFrogLuvr3 2009-09-07 . chapter 1This actually brought tears to my eyes (didn't help that as soon as I start reading James Blunt's 'Goodbye my Lover' starts playing) It's so poignent, good job |