This is great. Have you posted this somewhere else? I really want to read the rest.

At the risk of being cheesy, I think this fic is the cat's pajamas! I like the concept, it's very creative for a Tutu fic. You obviously did a decent amount of research on the period and I like how you incorporated major historical events and gave the characters different immigrant backgrounds. I felt like it fleshed out the atmosphere of NYC in the 1920's. I also like the storyline, it'll be very exciting to see what happens next. Personally, I prefer the look of a Rolls-Royce in the twenties to a Chrysler, but either way Rue is one classy dame ^_^

Oh, I didn't know Edel meant "gem" in German, I learned something new today! I always thought spelling it Edelle would be prettier. I enjoyed reading this, logging into my e-mail and seeing that this updated was a welcome end to an otherwise horrible day. Sadly, I don't know much about ballet or the 20s so I can't really judge how you've represented them, but I do believe you've woven your words with excellent skill.

Amazing as always! This story is fantastic! I love it!
I can't stop loling! Lol. Poor Ahiru/Duck...but it's just too priceless! Fakir is absolutely incredible! Fakiru rules!

AMAZING job! Absolutely perfect and flawless! I loved especially the part with Rue and Ahiru. I felt like you captured their personalities and communication wonderfully. And then that scene when Mytho and Rue first met was also very beautiful. All in all, awesome work! The Fakir/Ahiru tidbit also never ceases to make me smile. :)

Yep, I defiently love this story! The progress made is resonable, the AU is believable and all of the characters and their relationships are amazing. I especially enjoyed Rue and Ahiru's interaction. They just think they'll never see each other again, when in reality, a Romeo-Juliet friendship is developing! Wee~

Defiantly, its love.

Still enjoying this! Nice reflection on the history of entertainment (usually left to Singing in the Rain, which focuses on the speaking voice--"an' I cayunt stan'im.") And on pointe shoes, my knowledge of which comes from a documentary probably on "Dance in America" decades ago.

I noticed one slightly awkward change of tense ("To this day Rue does not..." could be "did not," although that will sound a bit strange next to "to this day.") The only other thing I saw was "kennel" for "kettle."

Don't rush, make the next one good too... I promise I'll go away from the computer for breaks while I wait.

You did okay. :)

This was a fantastic start,please update soon!
-MOTH

Great job, I don't know much about legal procedures, but it sounded good to me!
P.S.: does Corvo mean Raven? I'm curious.

Wow, awesome job with this! The plot is really picking up now. :D I loved the interaction between Fakir and Ahiru - they were very much in character - and that last part with Mytho and Rue was very nicely executed. The description was especially amazing. :D

Update soon please!

One chapter, and I'm hooked! LOL. This is absolutly amazing so far, you can count on me to be waiting for the next chapter!

What a treat to read another story written by you! I felt like this chapter was too short though (then again, I love long stories, so that could just be me) and moved too quickly. But hey, I look forward to reading more!

I saw this on lj too but I was too frazzled to leave a real review. Of the PT 20's AU your fanart spawned, I think I've enjoyed this one the most because it has the clearest conception of a larger, long-term plot. You keep both Duck and Fakir so in-character in this (and evil!Mythos too--I loved the principe thing, it is at once so mobster and so PT!). What I love about this is Duck's first vision of Mythos is so different than in canon and yet, the variation has lovely echoes of canon in it.

Mytho in the mob? Wouldn't've seen that one coming. And yet, strangely cool. It's original, I noticed barely any grammar or spelling issues, it's original, I love your writing style, and did I mention how usual a plot like this is? If you haven't noticed, I like rare ideas. Congrads, you get an A+ in my book. This looks promising, and I'm excited to see the next chapter.