I can honestly say this is the single most beautiful and haunting peice I have ever read. It was so gorgously depressing, yet there was a dim shimer of hope. You really should write another part to this.

Ahh.
This reminds me of
Jigoku Shoujo or in English, "Hell Girl";
the anime/manga.

Ya' know, cause of the last part.
XD

Bloody good job, yeah!
But, does Mukuro care even a little?
I can't tell..?

And Tsuna? Does he either? I'm so confused.

Love this story; im fave-ing it.
C":

I'll read your other stuff, you can count on that.
Because, you definitely have your own style.
& I love it.

~Pillule

i dont get the ending but AWESOME

Interesting.

I'm not exactly sure what is going on. Does Mukuro care, at least a little bit? What about the forest that they talk about? I don't remember that being in the manga or it may be so far in the beginning that I forgot it?.

Did Tsuna really love Mukuro? Was that the only time they had sex or did they have sex before that time as well?

Is this to imply that Mukuro took over Tsuna's body instead of going through the plan of dying and bringing his past self back to the future? Or was this a way to accomplish that plan, in that Mukuro took over the body and died in Tsuna's place?

I have to say, I love your writing style. And I think youir idea of subtly crossing Jigoku Shoujo over with Katekyo is simply brilliant and very original.

There are many things I didn't get when reading the first time, but mostly it's my own fault, because you were brilliant. Some of the most beautiful lines were those that sometimes we don't pay much attention to, like this:

"He takes to categorizing these knocks which come few and far in between, and this one, the rarest, comes from his mist guardian."

It's a briliant scene, and, with so much a description you gave us here, we can learn many things from Tsuna and his guardians on your story.

Many other passages follow the genious of your narrative, and Tsuna's ambiguous relationship is there, raw and cruel. Even if we understand the nature of Mukuro, we can't help but wish he didn't do what he did in the end.

Congratulations, really. You've got a fan here, and I'll be lookking forward any other fics from you!

AFGJHALDJKFGHDKJ At first I thought, ohya! 'You still write!' and then I'm all like 'OOH it's this!!' Grabe, what a long due date and you were probleming over this noong summer? XD Naks...brilliant as ever, mama. :) Will and always be in awe of how you write. XD