Wow, just wow. The characterizations portrayed here are just outstanding! I absolutely adore Alfred's point of view and how utterly asdasdasdasdafasdasd agh he is all the time, it really brings his personality out and makes the story much more engaging! Your story thus far is incredibly interesting, and I am just writhing in anticipation of how on earth you mean to get Ivan and Alfred together when he is being such a dick, it's absolutely wonderful oh my god.

I'm really saddened to see this was updated back in September! Of course you're busy, but, please, this simply must be continued! I hope profusely to see your hands spurred in continuation of this story. :)

more~!

love the story please continue it's quit amazing

...I love you...heheheh it was awesome! I cant wait for an update~ :D

Please update soon! D:

omg, this is so awesomely perfect. I love how Alfred cusses a lot when he's either really angry or really scared. xD And I can't blame Ivan for picking on poor Al; I totally would, too, if I was in his position! :D

OMG. MARRY ME?

Seriously, I can't believe how well you got everyone's characterizations down. I admit I had doubts with CanadaxBelarus at first, but this chapter was so awesome in terms of justifying it.

Steve is Australia, right? :D

And AMERICA. OH AL. He's such a dork, but HE'S SUCH A LOVEABLE DORK YOU'RE WONDERFUL. *hugs* Oh gods, everything I love about the IvanxAlfred pairing is RIGHT HERE. You are godly. And Ivan...love it how he's actually respecting Mattie because of Belarus XD

Update soon!
*worships*

This is EPIC! I love Ivan so much in this! I hope you update soon! XDD

I think that you just made me ship Matthew/Nataliya. *_*
This is very interesting and I really like your Alfred and Ivan. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

Oh Russia, how we love you so. I love how he admits that he loves to screw with people. As for the MatthewxNatliya pairing, it IS crack... but it somehow seems to work lol What with Canada being so nice and how maybe, Belarus just needs something else to love so she can get over her brother. I can kind of see it. Kind of. In this universe anyway xD Now I'm kind of curious about the brother's dad... Although I can already guess who it probably is lol

So yeah like this, find it very amusing, and please update when you can 'k? ^-~

Really can't wait for the next chapter!

"PSYCHO!"
xDD
I seriously couldn't stop laughing at that part. I was in the library so everyone was staring at me funny as I burried my head in my English-German dictionary to keep myself from getting kicked out. I'm blaming you if I do something similar to this to my teacher tomorrow >_>

Matthew with a gun is a really hot image in my mind x3

I can't wait to see whats happening with Arthur... the legion of dogs? Really? That's sort of a scary image... Arthur with a bunch of scary dogs and an evil smirk. I really can't wait to see what happens next.

Noo! Cliffhanger, dang. DD

Update, please~

Nataliya is actually...lovable in this chapter...and yet she's still kind of in character...oh, you're good!

Dad?
Smiling Dad?
Smiling pissed-off dad?
Smiling pissed off dad with rabid dogs?
I really want to see what happens in the next chapter!

Poor Steve!XD

You're completely wicked to leave this where you did. Still, that last line was brilliant.

Can't wait for the next chapter. I really want to know what Ivan's planning -- something to do with that whole "personal trainer" thing, right? Am I right? x_X

Gh want to know.

~Commander of Dreams, signing out.