that was really touching. your descriptions are so lyrical and unique!

A sweet and sad fic. :(
It was great anyway!! ^0^
Wow! You can write fics in half an hour?? Cool! =D
Well done!

Love,
Niki

No criticism for you... Very sweet and incredibly well-written. Good job :)

Wow... I thought I had you on author alerts, but apparently not. So imagine my surprise when I come to your profile, and see three new stories that I haven't read! I'm in heaven right now.

I loved this one, it is very painful, and yet perfect. I like how you tied in a phoenix, and how Roy will help him through his day of ashes. Very sad and poetic.

Great job.

aw that was sad.

love the story very cute an sweet and sad. very well written 2.

-cries-
That was beautiful.

I have nothing else to say. <3

Very cute. Short and sweet. I didn't see any obvious mistakes or typos, and for having written it in half an hour good job. Thanks for supplying us with some literature in between the breaks of your other stories.

Such sweet simplicity - "I'm here, Ed." Nothing else, just that and Roy's presence and understanding were all Ed needed for comfort. I want to say more, but my mind's mush from work and I can't think straight.

Great one-shot.

AW Poor Ed...T_T, but at least Roy was there to hold him up just incase he fell when the world do

hi,

as always, you manage to blow me away. You write wonderfully. i Love this, :P:P: i love he last lines especially, they are just full with feeling.

I like your writing and your stories a LOT, i think i have bout 5 works of u faved, and I author alert u too.:P:P:P

Never loose ur talent and inspiration
SK

This was a beautiful little scene. I enjoyed Ed's reasoning, as well as his thought son Roy and how he doesn't tell him not to feel what he does. I think that is rather pertinent to the pair.

*smiles* FAVES! Could Roy be any more perfect than he is here? I don't think so! :D God I'm such a sucker for WAFF! Love it, love it, love it! Nothing quite like it to make a dreary rainy day so much better - for both me and Ed! :) Ed really is like a phoenix isn't he. He completely tears himself apart one minute (no one angsts like an Elric!) and somehow manages to put himself back together the next, with Roy's help of course! ;) "Stupid flaming chicken" cracks me up!! XD

That was really good ... I like it. ^.^ You have a knack for using simple yet flowing language to describe concepts that should be old and overused, but somehow (like the phoenix! ^.^) are reborn and made new with your words.

*rereads above statement* Wow. That was ... >.< not very good ... Yours is better, WAY better. Trust me. ^.^

Iriko-chan

I don’t think that Ed will manage to get rid of this sense of guilt – but luckily he has Roy, who can give him support he needs.
It’s really poignant piece of work – bittersweet and beautiful.