Truly interesting tale. I like it. What I like best is that it's FINISHED WOO! And by that I mean that I wasn't stuck with a cliffhanger. I can read the whole thing and find out what happens, just like with other real books. Like some others, I'd like to see a sequel too.

Please continue writing. This was a lot of fun to read and your style is truly captivating.

Aw.

its so hard to find a plausable relationship between sarah and jareth

(yes, i know they were in love! But he also stole her brother. thats kind of a road block there.)

So i thank you for such constant, thrilling, beautiful writing.

i wish i had an ounce of your talent.

PLEASE keep writing!

*falls off her chair* Yep, I read the entire thing in ONE SITTING! Oh yeah! And might I say, for one of your earlier pieces, it was pretty awesome. I loved all of the characters, especially Puck. Is it a possibility that you'll ever do more in this genre? Good work!

This was a fun read! Thanks so much for it, I love the different mythological stories and it was great how you tied so many in. The plot was complicated enough to keep me guessing, for a little while I thought Wynne might be Lalia...guess not. I know you wrote this a while ago but I was all sad that your latest story ended so I went looking through your older stuff. ...It just occured to me, I wonder how you could work the differing mythological characters into, say Inuyasha...would Apollo be a fire demon?...just a thought...oh, alright, I'm just trying to inspire you to keep writing because I really like your style...and now that it's almost two in the morning, I better go...Thanks again!

-Never give up!

Is Sarah really dead? I had hoped that she was going to be pared with Jareth.

I couldn't stop reading to review. The suspense over where Sarah would be was driving me crazy. Anyway, I love your work. Please, keep writing.

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Phwee! 0

I hope ye do make a sequel for this! I'd love to see how it'd turn out and Sarah finally being declared ALIVE j00! D

I found it funny imagining Hades and his wife in a castle/duenguen reading something like that for some reason seeing we mortals do perceive 'em oddly! xD

But you wrote a wonderful story and I hope ye write a sequel. -

Taokitty

xD You bring out a good point, me lady... (Sorry, seeing how you had used the word in such previous chapters, it has affected me, and yes, I said me lady on purpose in that manner... *Sweat* Sorry if ye be male!)

As usual, twas very good! I'm wonderin' who Jareth'll (almost called him Jack for a second) get paired up with, seeing tis bugging me to no end!

And for some reason, I have a suspicion with Puck associating with Lemures, though, twas a random thought when I read the last line which is usually a threatening quote though harmless in appearance from the approach of a sadistic villain of some sorts...

... Don't ask.

Anyway, tie shall go read the next! I wish I could say I'm waiting for an update, but... ;.;

Taokitty

P.S. Scuse me odd behaviour, it seems only to take effect when reviewing yer stories. ;

Could it be... Sarah? 0

*Bounces off walls*

Even though I doubt it seeing I think she still lived even after she died if she be a fae an' all, even though that's probably wrong of me to think... ;.;

Anyway, good update as usual and I'm not sure whether I should trust that one man who actually confronted Giselle; he doesn't seem trust worthy for some odd reason...

Anyway, enough of me speculations, on with the next chapter!

... *Notices clock* O.O

Err... Tommorow! ;

xD It would be amusing I agree to have the Goblin King pratically buried in mud and an exasperated sight emitting from his features (or atleast, an impatient one) though, he does seem to be the type that gets rather calm of such things, neh? .;

Though, I was about to point and laugh at Jareth when it was mentioned that he was one of the three people that didn't have atleast one deer shot... Dangit... _

Anyway, as said, these trials seem VERY interesting for their motives rather than the goals of the men, so good job so far! :D

Taokitty

P.S. Haha, may all the suitors die/ leave in a painful way/death 8D

(Scuse me, it appears I may be a bit hyper... *Sigh* -.- )

Haha, I FINALLY get what you mean by having an obsession with killing Sarah with auto mobiles. xD

I gotta say, it is quite the interesting story, neh? Damn bastards saying the Queen can't rule herself, SCREW 'EM! D

Though, I'm a little sad Sarah seems to be staying dead, and not coming back anytime soon. ;.;

I was hoping that Sarah was the child that they switched with the 'still' one and that she was still alive even after how many years have passed... *Sigh* ;-;

People can hope, neh?

But enough of me moping! As said, this seemed to be a very interesting story with what sounds like very interesting trials that very much interested me. 0

Taokitty

P.S. I really gotta start discovering stories earlier; so I would be more tempted to review for each one... -.-;

(Note: Sorry if this is a repeat review, internet be messin' up D:)

Well i managed to read the entire story in a day and i've got to say, I absolutly loved it! lots of good characters and plot twists, evil cliff hangers. Well done! Look forward to reading more of your work!

I'm glad I read this it made for a grand adventure for the afternoon. I guessed the part about Sarah, but not that her father was in on it. This is GREAT!

I loved it. It was awsome. I really liked the plot and it kept me interested the whole way through. Please write a sequal.

Sequel please! I love this!