 SmileEdwardLuvsYhoo 2009-10-26 . chapter 4I really hope you continue this soon as I am enjoying it. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before but I don't really review unless I really have something in particular to say. So really when it comes to reviews from me, no news is good news since usually when I review, I review on stories where I think it could be improved in some ways, either the plot, the spelling or the grammar. You really are doing a good job in this story. The story has only just started and I'm already impatient for the next update! Usually I don't consciously look forward to a particular story to update until it's further on in the story, it was left in a cliffhanger or it's one of my favourite FAVOURITE stories on fanfiction :)
I hope you continue soon :)
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 Miss F Cullen 2009-10-20 . chapter 4Don't worry I'll wait! I really enjoy this series and i'm incredibly sorry that i didn't review :S |
 deedee157 2009-09-08 . chapter 2Thanks for the quick update, and i think the line from Princess diaries 2 is
Charlie Tango, the eagle has landed. I repeat, the eagle has landed
Please update soon |
 XxBlue-Eyed-BellaxX 2009-09-08 . chapter 2hahaha! This I was not expecting, Eagle is landing was in reference to Mia's grandma in Princess Diaries :)
great chapter, I'll pm you in a bit about the questions you asked me..
I wish I could update as quickly as you do. |
 Skepo 2009-09-08 . chapter 2eagle has landed is completely princess diaries 2 |
 XxBlue-Eyed-BellaxX 2009-09-07 . chapter 1...to see you nice! Haha, never thought I'd be quoting bruce forsythe on ..
I enjoyed the chapter, although, I have a feeling I will be revisiting hidden truth to make sure I remember everything, 'cause - in spy stories especially - it's the little details that matter.
Since I always tried to guess things in Hidden Truth, I shall do the same here...hmm, is she going to stay with the Cullens for better protection?
One thing I would say and in this I mean no harm, is to include espionage terminology, make *your* fic stand out from the rest.
I'm looking forward to reading more! |
 deedee157 2009-09-07 . chapter 1Nice to see you, to see you... finily
yeah so a bit confused, last chapter of hidden truth they had just kissed , so this chapter sohould have picked up from there... please update and maybe explain, so i'm not sat scratching my head to long.
Thanks
Glad your back good chapter. |
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