This was undeniably creepy; you've represented them in a wonderfully twisted light. In other words, this was done very well. Kudos!

--E.A.

Well, that was extremely interesting. And extremely CREEPY. xD

I don't know how I feel about his pairing, honestly. Kadaj and Yazoo... I think I definitely prefer KadajxCloud. *gets shot*

Actually, I probably prefer that over SephirothxCloud. *gets shot, AGAIN* Yeah, I'm crazy weird like that...

...Mother scares me.

im not sure if this is a little creepy or adorable, but amazing writing

thoughts?

SemeYazoo is a very very big YES.

I'll gladly except it, so, no need to shove it down my throat. Unless it helps. Then shove away. :D

Slightly creepy but hot and adorable and thoughtprovoking (I'm tired and need something to dwell on) and all-out awesome! I'm really glad that you got back to writing and even more glad it is something I know! XDD Hope to see more from you soon! Including Nobodies! I can't wait to see that!

My thoughts: hot. :D

Well, I don't usually read yaoi but ehrm...-stifles a squeal-...that was really well written. Good job.

Heeheehee. Yes, Yazoo could be a good seme, I think, now that I've read this. Sort of creepy, but good. Yazoo x Kadaj is fun :D