This was really good. You could feel her pain.

This movie is great i must admit ! but its also really sadd ! :( cuz Jane is in luv wit George and he doestn even no it ! then he falls for tess ! and tess is really not consideret of Jane's feelings... this is also partially Jane's fault thought cz she did not tell Tess how she felt ! ... This movie was the movie that my aunts and mom and grandmas chose to whatch while down in the Outer Banks ! It was out GIRLZ NITTE! 3

Wow. that was good. i loved it )

Well done. I've had it happen to me, and you've captured it beautifully.

Nice! You have a lot of talent.

This is spot on to her reaction in the film! I loved this - though to make it even better I would probably have put it in first person, just to make it more personal and emotive. x