This was hilarous! I loved Ashtree, she was such a breath of fresh air. Fantastically wonderful, I do say. :)

Bluebell seemed really, really funny too. She was a ginger, which made me lmao too, for some reason.

I don't really know what it was about this story, but it was really cute. :)

I rather liked this version of Sleeping beauty. Ashtree was very fun. _
C-chan

"not the best of stories"...?

Actually, it was quite enjoyable, and probably entirely publishable. It reminds me of the kind of thing I would find in the Marion Zimmer Bradley's Fantasy Magazine. Though I don't know if that one still exists, now that MZB has died.

Take it down from and submit it to Fantasy mags. It's good! I certainly liked it!

that was, if you dont mind me saying, very cute. i like it. good job. good luck on other stories!

K

That was funny! I like the crows and dwarfs and all Ashtree's other "minions". King Hawkus eas cool, too. I wish I could find more to say - but all I can say is that this gave me a really good read! Great job - especially the ending. Gotta love that. Awesome!

There were some typos and a bit of odd structuring here and there, but nothing that spoiled the story. It was very whimsical and refreshingly funny, and I enjoyed it heartily.

genius! this was very, very funny. ten points.

That was great fun! I love the confusion about the gift Ashtree gave at the christening, that was hilarious.

Very entertaining in an almost fantastical/satirical way.

That was very cute!

I love reading fairy tales with a twist. And I love how you incorporated parts from a bunch of different things to make this story.

ha ha ha hee hee hee o, that's great! i luv it. well written with just the right amount of jokes. i especially like the way u insert the other fairy tales into the story. very cute.

this is extremely good. I like how in the epilouge you incorporated other faery tales in to explaining some things

That was wonderful! I laughed the entire way through. :) I never thought of the story like this before, but it makes perfect sense! LOL!

hemlock

WOW! that was amazing! I loved it! teehee...made me laugh! ok, then...good job, good job *clap, clap* good job, good...k, i'll shut up now...too much leftover Christmas candy...WAY too much leftover Christmas candy...tootles! Jenny the chica