I like the part where they say what their favorite color is ^//^ that was the cutiest part of the whole page x3 keep on doing a good job.

...I wish to know more of this story... your doing quite well...

Very nice! The first chapter actually made me cry.(well, just a little) The second chapter was good, too, but still so sad! The third chapter partially restored my crushed emotions(what...?). Anyway, I can hardly wait until the next chapter. *is extremely excited*

this story just gets better and better! i cant wait to see more of it! <3 gahh im so anxious to see the next update, its gonna be great! <3

Things are getting 'very' interesting I shall await more to come. Hope you have a great birthday. (p.s I think that new character Endraseo is a cute avatar i've never heard before. Your really creative. ^-^)

Aw it was getting interesting :3 Go on go on xD I'll wait for the next chapter!