 bookscape 2010-02-27 . chapter 1 A very fast paced and engaging story. True to the flavor of the show, especially the last part. Could picture the action very clearly. Nice job! Only suggestion I could make would be to make sure that each speaker/pov is a separate paragraph. That was only a minor distraction to a very good story.
I always wondered what would happen if Kid ever made good on his threats for them to go their separate ways. Bravo! Bookscape
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 SecondStarToTheRight18 2009-09-27 . chapter 1Nice story. I like it. And I'm a huge fan of Alias Smith and Jones so yeah, haha, you should write more. I'll read. Toodles! |
 Spots on a Pony 2009-09-11 . chapter 1This is a very nice story. I liked it very much. I hope you will be writing more Alias Smith and Jones stories. |
 avoca 2009-09-08 . chapter 1Hi,
I really enjoyed your story. I hope to see more of your stories on the site.
Avoca |