Wow. Nice. Totally, way too cool - nice.

I'm kinda a Shakespeare fan myself, and I just loved how you turned it into a teenage drama. In a good way. The fact that you write like a dream doesn't harm, too.

And those cliques really are rather vicious. Being the one without a side, myself, I can really identify with Holly. Too bad I don't have a cute 17-year old friend to talk to...

Absolutely wonderful.

This should be this generation's fairytale, the one we'll tell our kids.

I loved it.

Incidentally, I think you'd love Turkey. Before your explanation on Sweaties and Trendies, I hadn't realized it, but that exists in Turkey as well. With different names of course. Except in my old High School: the french school in Ankara. You'd love it there. It's a land of peace (when you cast adults aside...)

Great story: literary allusions make it beautiful, and the, sadly, time-old plot makes it modern...

Well done.

Terr

That was cool.

I really liked this story... just a question... do read fransesca lia block? cause your style of writing is similar to hers. Once again, awesome story!

Moth

wow...that was GREAT! o)

i absolutely LOVED it...so sweet, and it just applied so well to high school cliques...GREAT job...i just can't stop saying that over and over...loved it...loved it...i'm gonna go add it to my favorites now, k? buh-bye!

Jenny the chica

No, I'm actually serious, my name is Dinah, And I'm SO very glad that someone has put someone with my name in afan fic. Oh, by the way, this story is really good. I want you to write more sotries, okay? Please?

I do like this story, it's so true *g* tee hee. write more damn you.

hi sweetie,

this is a very good story it took up some bored times. can you think of any actual people to take up the roles?

lotsa love

emily

xxxxxx

Love it! Good work. :)