Aliset, you did a very good job writing this back-story of what happened to a young teen Vincent when he first suffered the
'madness' sickness after his traumatic experience with Lisa. Though it's a little disconcerting to think Vincent suffered from split personality (or Dissociative Identity Disorder), and that his 'dark side' made him almost capable of rape if he could have gotten to Lisa, you handle the story very well. The sad parts made me shed some tears.

I didn't know how I was going to handle the part where Vincent's heart finally gave out, it's so much like what happened to my brother who was in so much distressed for so many hours that his heart couldn't take it and finally gave out, but it wasn't as traumatic as I thought it would be (it'll be 5 years in about 2 weeks since my brother passed away.)

I enjoy reading your stories, they're so well written and bring to life the beloved characters so skillfully, so I really hope you continue writing many more BatB stories. I look forward to reading your next story. Congrats on your new website. I already added it to my favorite blog sites.