Haha, awesome. I love your portrayal of the goth kids, and the fact that you have different names for them. (Dylan? Seriously? It makes me gag). I love Lucas for Kindergoth. LOVE IT.

Anyways, back to the story. It's really amazing, and the whole idea is delicious. You did an amazing job putting a plot to 131622's picture, it... I don't know, it just fits, you know?

Again, awesome awesome awesome. I'm going to be coming back to read it every now and then, just because of the awesome.