Oh my God, that was so sad *sobs*, especially when you learn how she died. The emotion really flowed through well so good on you for that.

i love that song! huh... MARLENE CANT DIEE!

tragic indeed

You say this is the most depressing thing you've ever written? Well, it's right up there with the most depressing to read, QueenAlla. Marlene dies? Marlene? Seriously, you did sad right well and I am. Nice work... mc

This was beautiful!

but oh so sad :(

poor Marlene! Poor Denzel...

although.. I'm glad she's 16 (as bad as that sounds, but imagine if she was the same age as in the movie...)

well thanks for putting it up!

Wow that was really very beautiful, it's nice to see something so 'serious' as such from you, you can obv. write in any theme X)

wow... i dunno if i just don't register emotions but this one is cute!

i technically never played FF7 although i've watched the movie of Advent Children.

but this is pretty nice. and yeah, i was thinking that the cloaked man was a Nobody. (giggles)

well, i don't care. i'm favoriting this one!

hurt and comfort makes me smile! (chuckles) yep!

oh, and first one to review... hm...

oh well. i like this. see ya in your future fics!