it is really good! please write more! I can not wait to hear what happens.

Another great cliffhanger, of course! I love how you described "Tangzilla" and added your own twist to Eelong's background. I'm thrilled you've continued this story, and, with a chapter this great, who CARES how long it took to write? :)

Keep on rockin'!

ACK! A CLiffhanger! So exciting! LOL

I really love this story! It's almost as if you've captured the thrill and sarcastic humor right from the Pendragon books themselves! It's hard to explain in words, but I would REALLY like to see this story continued! Or, at least, please keep writing amazing stories like these! -

Keep on rockin'!