I loved this story. Love it. I cannot express how much more content I am with this ending. Although I love and respected King's ending (and really couldn't have imagined it ending any other way) I wanted to see how the horn's presence changed things and I adore this interpretation. Thank you! It's hard to write and truly represent this story. You did it well :)

great stuff, read all the dark tower books and been left starving for more since. reading this, seems like you've really captured the magic that King was able to conjure up. hail wordslinger

And ... you have me in tears, the kind that hurt to blink back. Your prose is beautiful. Also, your interpretation of the possibilities inherent in the Tower. It may not be so simple as choosing Heaven or Hell, but there could be only one right way to get there. Sticking to the path and all that. I always think of King as a raging moralist, quick to punish sin and slow to recognize what you captured here, which is atonement. It cannot all be futile; at least, we can't believe it always to be so. Thank you for this story.

Ka like a wheel. I'm hooked.

If you write an original novel please update here. I will buy it. I can tell you're trying to emulate Kings style, but you have stylistic touches that show through that I really like.

Loving this. Onward!

Now this is fan fiction. One of the few FF chapters that left me wanting more. Definitely finishing this.

This was a very enjoyable read From keeping everyone in character to clearly thinking out the what-ifs to capturing King's style... well done. The transitions between chapters were a little jumpy and if you were to expand this I think there's plenty of things still to cover (I would have loved to see the whole ka-tet meet Dandelo, if only to see Eddie save the day again), but overall it's one of the best DT fics I've seen. Thankya.

Sublimely beautiful. I hope you still occasionally come on here to check things, because I just want to tell you that you did an outstanding job...absolutely awesome!

Is this...the END? NOOOOOOO! such an awesome story come to an end...oh well pity this book aint popular or you'd have far more reveiws. thxs for making this fic, always hated the part whr Roland let Jake die and wanted to find out what WOULD hav happened if he didnt let the poor child down. Thanks alot

Awesome! The story began a little slow and felt very disjointed (but I agree that it's better you did a short story than rewriting the entire series, eeee!) at times but you had the characters down and the heart in there is so strong. This is the way I wish it would have ended too, I love seeing the Ka-tet together again. You've made my day writing it, say thank-you. :D This is probably the best DT fic I've read.

wow wow wow! heck u captured the characters personaitlies so well! I too believed bout wat they'd hav used Jake in tat way, if only his watch didnt save him. thxs 4 making tis fanfic, sumhow i like it more den the original story _" heh plz update soon? .

Thankee for a well done tale. This made my heart glad.

As a fan of the Dark Tower series, I appreciate the effort you took in keeping the characters true to their canon personalities. You did an excellent job with this.

Quite good!

I love how you opted to end it. You really explored the entire concept fully - thank you for posting!

Amazing story! I love how you managed to put together this new cycle, it just makes so much sense...

I really hope to read the last chapter to see how you deal with the confrontation with the Crimson King and what ending you have in mind.

Keep up the good work!