| Reviews for Invisible |
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lya24 9/8/09 . chapter 1Am I intrigued! Heck yeah! I am beyond intrigued. I absoultly love it and want more. So please update soon. before I go nuts waiting to find out what happens next. |
Aaron Leach 9/8/09 . chapter 1Awesome story update soon. |
Alliyya-13-Superstar 9/8/09 . chapter 1wow im so hooked on already i love their little confessions i need next chapter like lois needed her coffee yay 17 day till smallville totally worth it your'e rite clois like totally has evolved i have season 4 on dvd and its so odd look at the the way clark and lois interact awesome chapter |
Phnxfyr1 9/8/09 . chapter 1Can't Wait For More |
TheGryfter 9/8/09 . chapter 1Yes, intrigued is the word. I like the duality of the piece: the dual wishes, the pictures and the Good nights... Carry on, please! |
Lordofthedrums93 9/8/09 . chapter 1Zod, Metallo, and Clois, Oh my! Can't wait for season 9! Anyway, I am indeed intrigued by this new storyline. |
winthjo 9/8/09 . chapter 1Excelent start so far, too short though. Who was the one "in the dark" by Clark? Jonathan? Hope to see more real soon. |
annaangel23 9/8/09 . chapter 1Wonderful start! I can't wait to see what Lois's mom tells her and if Clark freaks out when she's not at work;) can't wait for the rest! Update soon! :) |
Jeremy Shane 9/8/09 . chapter 1good chapter & more please so this has nothing to do with your last story where Lois & Clark are married, man i wanted to read more about their married life, sigh, oh well maybe next time, i'm sad now |
rockyshadow 9/8/09 . chapter 1A confession definitely to be made by Clark. I love how you always include references to the episodes. I also love the detail about the photgraph that they both have. I'm really curious about the reason for Lois' invisiblity. I love that her mom is there with her. I wonder when Clark will find out what happened to her. |
cloisharley 9/8/09 . chapter 1yes i'm intrigued...lol it'll be interesting to see what she sees |