Reviews for Invisible
lya24 9/8/09 . chapter 1
Am I intrigued! Heck yeah! I am beyond intrigued. I absoultly love it and want more. So please update soon. before I go nuts waiting to find out what happens next.
Aaron Leach 9/8/09 . chapter 1
Awesome story update soon.
Alliyya-13-Superstar 9/8/09 . chapter 1
wow im so hooked on already

i love their little confessions

i need next chapter like lois needed her coffee

yay 17 day till smallville

totally worth it

your'e rite clois like totally has evolved

i have season 4 on dvd and its so odd look at the the way clark and lois interact

awesome chapter
Phnxfyr1 9/8/09 . chapter 1
Can't Wait For More
TheGryfter 9/8/09 . chapter 1
Yes, intrigued is the word.

I like the duality of the piece: the dual wishes, the pictures and the Good nights... Carry on, please!
Lordofthedrums93 9/8/09 . chapter 1
Zod, Metallo, and Clois, Oh my! Can't wait for season 9! Anyway, I am indeed intrigued by this new storyline.
winthjo 9/8/09 . chapter 1
Excelent start so far, too short though. Who was the one "in the dark" by Clark? Jonathan? Hope to see more real soon.
annaangel23 9/8/09 . chapter 1
Wonderful start!

I can't wait to see what Lois's mom tells her and if Clark freaks out when she's not at work;)

can't wait for the rest!

Update soon! :)
Jeremy Shane 9/8/09 . chapter 1
good chapter & more please

so this has nothing to do with your last story where Lois & Clark are married, man i wanted to read more about their married life, sigh, oh well maybe next time, i'm sad now
rockyshadow 9/8/09 . chapter 1
A confession definitely to be made by Clark. I love how you always include references to the episodes. I also love the detail about the photgraph that they both have. I'm really curious about the reason for Lois' invisiblity. I love that her mom is there with her. I wonder when Clark will find out what happened to her.
cloisharley 9/8/09 . chapter 1
yes i'm intrigued...lol

it'll be interesting to see what she sees
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