|Reviews for Tangled Web|
| u2shay 10/19/09 . chapter 8
*pulling my hair out!* because I can't wait to find out what happens next!
I love this chapter! Daddy Carlisle is the bomb!
I am so wondering what the the Volturi are going to do when they find out about Bella. Will Edward change her...will he chose to love Bella or leave her alone...there are just so many questions!
You are welcome for the shout out, it was my pleasure!
| francophile1 10/19/09 . chapter 8
I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this chapter. Out of all explanations of what a 'singer' is, yours is the best I have read. I also loved that you got Daddy C involved. Awesome chapter.
| bluemaybits 10/19/09 . chapter 8
Wow, the phone call with Carlisle! I like your interpretation of the singer mythology!
| ash0507 10/19/09 . chapter 8
love this story! i really love the fact that i dont know whats going to happen next!
| hotmama4jd 10/19/09 . chapter 8
Damn. I didn't see the ILY revelation coming from Edward this quickly. Hm. Love that he called the big C - that dude just has the wisdom. :)
| Nissa-Cullen 10/17/09 . chapter 7
I love this story it is entertaining and different from others. What's going to happen? Will he find out if Bella knows about vamps? Will he have to kill her? Aro would be interested in her since Edward can't hear her thoughts, hasn't he thought of that? I know he won't want her to be in danger or dead so that might be an option, at least he could have her for eterenity that way. Will we get to see the other Cullen's in this story? I can't believe you have Jacob working for the Volturi and that he and Edward are friends. Just lets you know how vastly things can chage with different circumstances. Please keep up the good work, I'm really enjoying it and look forward to reading more.
| MoniMD 10/14/09 . chapter 7
Haha! I found you here!
I tried to cheat but my crime didn't go far away since there was only one more chapter than in twilighted... Damn! *pouts* Still, it was something! :)
Bella was really funny in the car: "Hello Mr Martin..." haha! hilarious!
Poor Edward is so confused. For someone who didn't feel anything for so long to be feeling so many conflicting emotions at the same time must be maddening!
And your Bella is just so cute and sweet. I understand why Edward is so fascinated by her. She is truly a little angel...
Thanks for the update :)
| wantmoretwilightnow 10/13/09 . chapter 7
Another incredible (let me emphasize that one more time: . ) chapter. I LOVE the Edward you have created and the connection with your Bella.
Thank you for updating so quickly; this is becoming like a drug to me :-)
| u2shay 10/13/09 . chapter 7
Loved the new chapter!
It was utterly fantastic!
| hotmama4jd 10/13/09 . chapter 7
Oh, I almost feel sorry for Edward. He can't even imagine himself happy can he? He is so busy holding onto his precious control that he can't see beyond his own nose. I really wish you had a BPOV outtake - her thoughts would be intriguing.
Thanks for the quick update. :)
| Vamp4475 10/13/09 . chapter 7
ok let me get this straight
They went out and Edward has finally realize that he has feelings for Bella. When the night was over...she 'threw herself' on him and they held each other for a while. then he confesses that he can't stay away from him...and then she confesses that she is afraid that he would dissappear. and at the end he comes to a conclusion that he has finally found Bella and that he is not ready to let her go...did i get that right? LOVE THE STORY!
| chibichanga 10/13/09 . chapter 7
I Love this story! I also enjoy Jacob in this story.. and I usually don't enjoy Jacob in any form.
| katt-ryn 10/12/09 . chapter 1
Hey there- before heading on to chap 2 I was intreagued by your use of Jacob. I bet thats not the only hm your going to give.
| feebee70 10/12/09 . chapter 6
this really good! please keep going :)
| BlueDiamondRing 10/10/09 . chapter 6
OMG. This is great, can't wait for more. When is Alice going to call him out of the blue and tell she knows about Bella. Lol.